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Life’s Tales (Intro & Chapter 1)

I haven’t really named this yet but it’s a story I’ve been working on for a while now. Let me know what you think…it starts off kinda slow but it’ll get there

Coach John part II

A story I have had in my head for a while and decided to act on it, please let me know where I can improve I am not a writer by trade. Thank you

Girls just want “Fun”

Candice and Cherry are both college students who have different lives and soon will realize how deep of a connection they will have with each other with a special and seductively naughty night. Hope you guys like this one. its a work and progress. also, I have a patreon recently created. come check it out. my stories are being moved over there. Patreon.com/Bluewings

The Sisters Chapter 1

Before i start the story Im going to decribe myself, I’m about 6 foot 3 inches tall I’m kinda chubby but not grossly so. I’m naturally tanned for I’m part Mexican, my biceps are nicely toned and defined. I have brown hair that is grown out a little, my eyes are steel blue, turning grey in the dark and bright blue in the light.
It started when I moved back in with my mom. I was almost 17 and was a junior in high school. I remember that day, it was cold and miserable. I was the first one there not wanting to be late to the bus as the new kid. I noticed to short young girls walk up in front of me, but being dark outside I couldn’t see them very well but they where quite plainly sisters. I went to school and had a regular high school day, full of homework and bitchy teachers but I didn’t see the two girls, so I assumed they were in the middle school across the street. After school let out I got on the bus to go home, then the eldest of the two sisters stepped on the bus I couldn’t help notice how insanely hot she was, I later learned she was in 8th grade and her sister was in 6th. She had jet black beautiful hair down to the middle of her back, her face was perfectly shaped and completely smooth, she had a slender but not grossly skinny frame, though being in 8th grade she didn’t have much breast to speak of, although they were still a nice perky size, probley a medium A cup. She wore a neon blue jacket half zipped revealing the tight school shirt she wore, I got a glimpse at the tight yoga pants she wore before sat down.
Her sister got on not long after her and she was like a younger version of her sister. Same black hair though not as long, same perfect face and a little smaller body and no breasts at all. She took longer deciding where to sit so I got a better look at her, she was wearing a tight purple t-shirt and dark blue jeans almost black. As she turned around to walk back up too the front I caught a glimpse of her nice round ass. I widened my eyes because for a 12 year old she had a beautiful ass, it swayed back and forth as she walked even jiggling slightly. I figured her sister must have an even nicer one considering she’s older, and I had no idea how right I was. I rode home listened to music and thought about the two almost twin-like sisters. My stop was the second stop, I got up and was disappointed to find people blocking my view of the girls but once I got off I was thrilled to find that we walked the same side walk to get home, although I lived a block or so away from them. But as soon as I started walking I looked down and saw a beautiful sight.
I watched as her perfectly rounded ass bounced and jiggled in front of me. But to add to the pleasure her yoga pants that she wore, despite being black, we’re see through to the point where I could see the slightly tanned tint of her ass cheeks. I almost moan out loud and to top it off I could see the tiny blue g-string she wore. Seeing all this was getting me excited as I noticed my member growing in my pants. I prayed they didn’t turn around for I was wearing sweat pant, I almost sighed with relief when the turn a corner to go to their house. I have to walk quite I bit to get to my house so the whole time I couldn’t stop thinking of the sisters, I just couldn’t get the images of their tight young asses jiggling in front of me. As soon as I got home I went downstairs to my room and pulled out my hard prick. Now I don’t brag about my size but I think I’m fairly good sized, I’m about 8 and a half inches and thick.
I knew my mom would be home in about an hour so I quickly jerked off my member to the mental image of the angel sisters. I finished with prefect timing for my mom got home soon after I finished. She asked me how my day was and we had a normal day after that. I woke up the next day thrilled it was Friday, I got ready for school and went out to the bus stop a little late. There was an up side to this I got to walk behind both sisters, and in the glowing yellow light of the street light i was in heaven. I decided at that moment that I had to, no matter what, get inside those sisters. So all day at school I thought about my plan and concluded that I would do it tonight. So after school I walked behind them and watched them run into their house I pinpointed where their rooms where based on the fact they both had girly blinds on their windows.
I went home and prepared the stuff I would need for tonight, I decided that I would take the older sister tonight and the younger one someother time. I was going to be wearing a mask and they would be blind folded and gagged so there was no chance of being caught. I set my ski mask aside and packed rope, a home made gag and tools for picking locks if nessary in a string back pack I never used. I hid the stuff and went about my day. At about 11:00 pm I decided I had waited long enough, I went up stairs and quietly sneeked out my back door. I wasn’t n much of a hurry so I took my time walking over there. When I arrived at their house I studied it under the dark cover of a tree, after watching for about ten minutes I was satisfied everyone was asleep. I ran to their back door and quickly looked inside, nobody their either. Smiling to myself I checked my surroundings before getting the tools out of my bag and picking the lock, after the door was opened I froze remembering they had a dog. As soon as I thought that he came running up to the door thankfully not barking, he sniffed me and licked me. I smiled and let myself in knowing he wouldn’t be a problem.
I looked into a room that had a girly ‘keep out’ sign on it, I walked in and looked at her and confirmed she was the older sister. I shut the door and put on my mask and took out the gag and blind fold. I first very carefully tied her to the bed spread eagle. I smiled at how deep of a sleeper she was. But she woke up after I put the gag in, her eyes snapped open and finding that she couldn’t moves started to freak out. I watched in amusement and quickly blind folded her, she still struggled and if she kept doing that it would be hard to accomplish what I wanted. I leaned down an whispered “Keep struggling and you will hurt. Understand?” She rapidly shook her head and lay still. I chuckled quietly and pulled the covers off here and was pleased to find she wore only a baggy shirt and so tight pink panties. I looked at her face to find a panicked look, I smiled and reached for her young body.
(I know this isn’t erotic but I tested out this story I’ve been wanting to write. If you like it comment below I will probley add the rest of the chapters soon, which will be very sexual. Let me know what you think! Thanks)

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Lookout Point

In my junior year, Steve became my main squeeze. But I found I had room for more squeezes.

Convict!

Here Convict is the victim of doctors, health industry and some racist people in the community! Donation collection, helping poor, helping disabled people, mental health issue are few issues people like to help but here corruption took place! Corruption of two countries play a vital role destroying his entire life! We have lot of stories people getting the justice, but there are few cases where they don’t. Here is a story of a convict, his revenge and happy ending!

Kelly The Schoolgirl

Kelly’s mom leaves her alone for a week with no one but her animals and young friend Ashley to keep her company….

Football Days 1

My story starts the summer before my junior year in high school. After I had got my drivers license in April, which was five months later than I should have, I started helping my uncle on his farm. That led to me starting my own business that summer, with a little of his help, that involved me cutting and baling hay for a lot of the farmers in the area. The long hours and hard work had changed my body from the pudgy lid that I had been to a lean more sculpted 16 year old. I had also been lifting weights that summer with a few of my friends that played football with me.
The season was fast approaching and I had made sure that I was in great shape as I had been injured in the middle of the previous season, and I knew that would hamper my chances of being the starting quarterback. The kid I would have to beat out had less talent, but had the advantage that his dad was one of our coach’s drinking buddies. I knew I had the better physical tools, but because I had missed so much time he had the experience.
I hadn’t seen many of my friends as i had been busy doing other people’s work all summer, and the few that I did see I wanted to keep secret all the things that had been happening with me, especially the fact that now I had some money to spend. I had put most of it in the bank, but not after replacing the beat up little S-10 my parents had bought me with a brand new Dodge Ram with a V-10, so I could pull my equipment around. It was about a month before practice started that I ran into Nicole, the girl I had the biggest crush on. It was the saturday before our captain’s practices started, and I was with my best buddy Luke on our way to the next town to watch some dirt track racing. I stopped for gas when we got to Rice Lake, and while I was watching the pump, a familiar green car pulled up to the next pump. I knew that she hadn’t recognized me, but my heart was still fluttering. She was one of the football cheerleaders, and I had wanted her since the eighth grade.
She was still pumping gas after I had paid, so I snuck up behind her and said “Long time no see cutie.”
“What?” She said, turning around. “Oh my god, Patrick!” And she threw her arms around me.
She had gotten a reputation of being kind of a slut, but most of the stories turned out to be lies, but I still didn’t care. “What are you doing out here tonight? And you look great.” she told me.
“Me and Luke are going to the races tonight, what about you?”
“Oh don’t know. Thought about going to the dance tonight, but I’m not sure. Too many stupid guys there. Plus my parents are gone for a few days so I have the house to myself, so I thought I could relax” she informed me.
I replied “Well here’s my new cell number so if…..you know……you wanna….go ou….I mean…..” I stammered. I always got nervous an choked when I tried to ask her out.
“I will, thanks” she grinned and leaned in and gave me a soft kiss on the cheek.
“Ok then, later babe” I said as I turned to my truck. “Yeah, later” she smiled, “nice truck” she added as she walked to the door of the store. I sat in the seat staring at her ass while she walked away before Luke said “Nice work dude. Now hows about we get to the race?”
The racing was awesome, and we met up with Luke’s dad, which was cool because Luke was going to go to his house anyway after the race. After I said goodbye to him and his dad my phone was ringing. “Hello?” It was Nicole. “I’m bored and lonely, do you want to come over?” I couldn’t believ what I was hearing. “Uhh, sure. I’l be there in a litte while” was my reply. “Good” I heard “I’ll see you then. Bye” it was the sexiest tone I had ever heard from her voice. I got to my truck, and started on my way there.
It took me about ten minutes to get to her house, and I found my hand shaking when I reached to knock on the door. I jumped a little when it opened right before I could knock. “Sorry,” she said as she saw my reaction “come on in.”
I kicked my boots off while she closed the door, the whole time I was staring at her. She was wearing a long t-shirt, and I could barely see her shorts under the hem of it. It was a look that I had never seen on her and it was amazing. She is about 5’6″ with shoulder length brown hair that had blonde highlights in it. She has cheerleader legs, which were really being shown off by her shorty shorts, and an amazing ass. She turned back to me, and with a smile said “Thanks for coming over. I’m really glad that you did.”
She gave me a tour of the house, which ended in her bedroom. In there we sat and talked for a few hours. I was sitting on the floor, and she on her bed. I announced that I had to go to the bathroom, and when I came out she met me with a kiss. With that we started really making out. Our tounges mashing into each others and our hands running all over each other.
I had a hand on each opf her ass cheeks when she broke the kiss. “Lets go to my room.” She led me back upstairs, and laid on her bed. I moved next to her and we began kissing again. Her hand found my cock, and she rubbed it through my jeans. “Oh it feels so good” she said. I had a hand up her shirt, massaging one of her perfect handful sized tits. She unbuckled my belt, and undid my jeans, while I took off her shirt, which now left her toppless, as she wasn’t wearing a bra.
“You are absolutely perfect” I said, which made her blush. “Thanks, noone has been as nice to me as you, and I’m so glad that we have been friends” she replied, “Now let me give you what you deserve.”
With that, she got on her knees and peeled off her shorts. She wasn’t wearing panties either! “So perfect” was all I could say as I drank up the sight of her naked. She wasn’t shaved, which kind of dissapointed me because of all the porno I had been going through that summer, but her hair was trimmed vey short. She smiled and pulled off my t-shirt, and then my jeans, releasing my dick into her view for the first time. She looked at it then back at me and grinned.
I was getting a little nervous and bluttered “I haven’t done this before,” and I looked down and turned a deep shade of red, because she was experienced and I didn’t want to dissapoint her. She put her hands on both sides of my face and sweetly said “Don’t worry sweetie, it will be alright,” and then kissed me deeply again. She broke the kiss and moved to my neck, then chest. I reached my hand down to her waist, then to her ass. I began squeezing her ass cheek in my hand as she kissed down my faint six-pack, and then kissing the head of my dick. It’s probably not the biggest. But it is almost eight inches and fairly thick, but she slid the head easily into her hot mouth, causing me to moan out loud. “Oh baby, that feels awesome,” at that moment, my fingers reached her pussy, and I found it soaking wet. I easily slipped a finger into her hole, and started pumping it in and out, making her take my dick out of her mouth to gasp. “Turn around, lets 69,” I told her and she turned her gorgeous ass around and straddled my head. I dove into her pussy, running my tounge everywhere making her moan louder before she returned to sucking me. I even ran my tounge up to her asshole, giving it a few good licks before returning back to her pussy, and finding her clit. When I did, she came off my cock again saying, “Oh yes baby! Right there! OH I”M GONNA CUM!” I stuck two fingers in her dripping snatch, making her scream more. “YES THERE! HOLY SHIT!” I felt her pussy clamp onmy fingers, and she started sucking me again hard. When her pussy finally relaxed, I couldn’t take anymore. “Oh fuck, I’m coming!” And I exploded in her mouth. She couldn’t catch it all, some of it leaking around the corners of her mouth.
She let my dick fall out of her mouth and turned back around and lay on my chest. “Let me get that,” I said wiping my cum from the corners of her mouth, and then onto her bed. “That was amazing! Nobody has made me come like that. WEll I guess no-one has made me come at all,” she said “I’m glad that my first great orgasm was with you.”
“No problem, babe. Thats what I’m here for.” I replied making her giggle. in the aftermath, my cock began to get hard again, which she promply noticed, causing her to say “I’ve been on the pill for a few months now, and I’ve never done it without a condom. I want to share that experience with you too.” She began kissing me again, and then moved over me. “Help it in for me,” she asked. I positioned my swollen head at the entrance to her sopping wet snatch, while she slid down. “Oh my God,” she said as I filled her up, “This is amazing.” She finally bottomed out and slid back up. “Holy shit babe, you’re so tight,” her pussy felt so good on my cock. She started pumping faster until I felt her pussy start to clamp down on my cock. “Oh fuck I’m cumming again!” And come she did, her orgasm coursing through her, which went on longer than the first one. When her orgasm finally subsided she looked down at me and said “Will you get behind me and fuck me doggy style?” All I could do was nod. I let her climb off of me and positioned myself behind her. I slid my cock up and down her beautiful pussy, before sliding into her all the way in one thrust. “OH FUCK!” she yelled. “Thats so good! Faster!” I complied and aswered “Whatever you want baby.” I started thrusting faster and faster, making her moan and scream louder. I then slid my thumb down to her cute little asshole and rubbed the little bud a little causing her to go into her third orgasm! “HOLY SHIT! I’M COMING AGAIN! COME WITH ME BABE! PLEASE!” I finally gave in and felt the come surge through my cock. “OH FUCK HERE IT COMES! OHHHH YEAH I’M COMING!” My cock unloaded another huge load of come making her scream again.
She fell forward and I stayed with her and laid on her back, giving her little kisses until my cock finally slipped out of her. I rolled on my back, and she to her side facing me. “Wow, that was amazing. If I would have known that, I would have always been with you,” She smiled and gave me a kiss. I was so totally spent that all I could do was smile and nod. I looked at her clock and saw it was after two in the morning.
“I have to work in a few hours,” I said “I better get home quick.” She put on a pout, but said “Ok, but we have to meet a few more times before school.” “No prob,” I said as I pulled on my pants and shirt. She walked me to the door, and as I was slipping my boots on I noticed my cum was running down her leg and almost to her knee. She gave me a goodbye kiss, and I warned her htat she may want to clean up. “Thanks, I think i might,” and with a smile and one more deep kiss she bid me good night.
“What a year this will be,” I said to myself as I crawled into my bed 20 minutes later, falling asleep as my head hit the pillow.
This is my first story, sorry it’s starting a little slow, be kind and patient with it. More to come if you like

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Sebbys Way with Me Chapter One

My names Elijah and I had just moved to a new state, South Dakota. I am 16 it’s my sophomore year and I have yet to meet anyone who lives here. I was relaxing on my bed with my journal in my hand. I wrote the last few sentences. “I live with no mother but a very overly protective and loving father. My father knows I’m gay and is completely supportive of me. He named my middle name to match his first, Elijah James. I have dark brown auburn hair just like my beautiful mother. I have deep brown eyes that I got from my father. I’m a bit of both of them.” I frowned at how depressing my diary sounded at this point. I closed it and shoved it back under my mattress in its new place which has already made a nice spot for it. I began pulling my white T-shirt up over my head when there was a knock at the door. It sent chills up my spine; I quickly pulled my shirt back down and walked down the long hallway to our big beautiful front door. It was white with a beautifully designed window and gold paint with it. I opened the door quickly and eagerly. I had to look straight up to see this stranger at my door. Standing at about 5 feet tall I’m not very proportional for my age. I looked up to find a handsome boy about a couple years older and definitely taller than me. “Hey, I’m Sebby your next door neighbor. Welcome to Rapid.” He wore a big beautiful white smile. I replied with my somewhat girly voice with a thank you. He smirked and looked me up and down I grimaced at his actions. He stopped and was staring at my feet. I looked down at my feet and realized what he was grinning about. My favorite reindeer socks which were very childish, I quickly hid one of my feet behind my leg. “Is that all you wanted Sebby?” I asked eagerly. I wanted him to leave so I could spare myself further embarrassment. I felt my face had grown hot which usually meant my cheeks were red. He looked back up at me and smiled. “One last thing” he said in a very judging voice. “How old are you?” I could tell just by his body language he wanted to laugh I was angry at this point. I bit my lip and muttered “16” I couldn’t help but noticed he was staring at my lips. He then said “Okay I’ll see you later” He then turned and left. I glared in his direction as he walked off my porch. I slammed the door and locked it. “What the hell was that about?!” I screamed, “Who does he think he is?” I glared down the long hallway and stomped my way to the bathroom.
I was stripping my clothes off when I noticed the big mirror that hung above the sink. I looked at myself. My long dark brown auburn hair that was just past my ears in the back and short in the front, giving me a nice side sweep. I looked at my button nose and my reddened cheeks. I looked into my big brown eyes. Finally I looked at the things I hated most about myself. My lips, they were abnormally big for my face. They were pink and puffy, my friend Mellon used to say they were perfect for blow jobs. I frowned, and walked my slender pale body to the shower. The only thing I hated more in the world was water. I was afraid of water, I couldn’t swim and I plainly didn’t see any fun in it at all. I closed my eyes and stepped into the warm shower. I could only spend 20 minutes in the shower if I were lucky. I spent about ten washing myself my hair and trimming some unwanted hair on my body. I stepped out of the shower to notice I had forgotten a towel. “Fml” I said to myself. I opened my door and took a peek out looking toward the living room I noticed the window that took up two thirds of the wall was wide open the curtains hung to the sides of it. Great I thought to myself just peachy. I than decided to run to my room hoping to avoid anyone noticing I had made it. I than crawled into my bed after combing my hair and brushing my teeth, I was laying in bed and the last thought that crossed my mind before I fell asleep, was Sebby. His tall slender built body and his dark brown hair and perfect teeth. I wonder how big he is I thought to myself.
Morning First Day of School
“Elijah!” My father screamed, “Get up you lazy bum” I always loved the way he wakes me up in the mornings. I grinned and proceeded to get ready. I than met my father in his brand new Black polished Mustang Gt. The engine of it purred so loudly it made my skin tingle.
Fifteen Minutes later
I quickly hugged my father and thanked him for the ride. Exiting his vehicle I took in all the details of my new school. There were hundreds of kids going in and a few sneaking back out. I smiled and made my way through the doors with several people behind me. They made a few remarks about me none mean but some were “Who’s he”, “he’s so small!”, or the classic “Awww the new freshman are so cute!”. The last statement always made me angry even though I couldn’t blame them for mistaking me as a freshman it still made me mad. Walking my hardly 5 foot body to the main office I was than greeted by a woman named Jan. She was the head secretary of the office; she smiled at me and began a conversation her hopes of making me feel comfortable. “You must be Elijah the new boy. Well they say you’re a sophomore but you’re so small.” She smiled a regularly genuine smile but I wasn’t sure what to make of it. She handed me a piece of paper with my classes and my locker number.
I than made my way past an ocean of people to my locker as I was just starting to relax and get comfortable. Sebby turns into my locker area. His face had a devilish grin on it. I had a regular surprised look on my face, I knew I was showing it and I didn’t care what he thought. He then handed me a picture, I looked at him and looked down at it. “What’s this?” he just smirked and replied “Open it”. So I opened the neatly folded picture, my heart sank so fast and my stomach was in knots. I couldn’t breathe or talk. It was a picture of me, naked in my house. My anger flared faster than it ever has. I tore the picture up and threw it at his face. “What the hell are you some kind of a pervert?!” I screamed loudly, some people stopped and looked but kept walking. He smirked and leaned in very close to my small body literally towering me. My face got instantly red and I couldn’t speak. “Watch yourself I would be very careful with the way you speak to me.” I was on the verge of crying but managed to choke out, “What do you want from me?” It was so quiet I didn’t think he heard me. “Everything” He said in a low voice right next to my ear. My hands began to shake and I grabbed the end of my shirt and squeezed my fist I than looked up at him. He looked down at me almost with a look of shame for what he had said. “So much for that beautiful face of yours”, he said as he walked out of the hallway into a mob of people. My throat had closed by now and I sank down onto the floor hugging my knees. My feelings were all tangled and I wasn’t sure what I was feeling I was feeling depressed and angry but at the same time I wanted to kiss Sebby I wanted him to take advantage of me. I than rested my head on my knees and let a few tears sneak their way out of my eyes.
I later found out I had four classes with Sebby. That gave me two classes alone to myself to breathe. I had just met this boy and already felt suffocated and scared of him. I spent four of my classes as far away from Sebby as I could get refusing to look at him my eyes were bloodshot and puffy so I tried to make it so he couldn’t see them. I was walking out of my last class that didn’t have Sebby in it, I noticed someone beside me staring at me. I turned to see a girl; she was short with big blue eyes and pale white hair. Okay maybe not white but it was very blonde, and natural. I noticed her I.D. she was also a sophomore. I smiled at her, her face grew pink and she quickly walked by me. I was confused and surprised, usually no girl looks at me let alone a rather good looking one. I made my way to my locker and put my things away. I felt a hand brush onto my hip the hair on the back of my neck was standing straight on end. I turned around fast and pressed my back to my locker door. Sebby’s beautiful eyes were amused and he was grinning. “Someone is a little jumpy?” he said in a smooth almost alluring voice. “How about I give you a ride home?” I glared at him. “Why would you want to give me a ride home and what makes you think I would let you?” I said disgustedly. He then smiled and slid his hand behind his head and rubbed his head. “Because I know you walk home and it’s raining.” I tilted my head to the right and stared up at him. “Okay I guess.” I stared down at my feet the whole way to his truck. I had to use the handle to get in; I slammed the door and looked straight ahead. I noticed he was looking at me but I didn’t want to look back. He then drove to my street and stopped at the beginning of it. “What are you doing” I said bewildered.
He reached his hand under my chin and pulled me to look at him he then admired my lips and eyes. “I’m going to make such a mess of you” my heart was beating and my face grew red “what did you just say?” He smirked and pulled my lips to his as I tried to struggle. I felt his soft lips touch mine and my penis grew very hard very quickly. He grabbed my wrist and pulled me close to him still kissing me I was drowning in ecstasy but at the same time I was very scared; I’ve never done anything with anyone before. I enjoyed his touch more than I should have. He shoved his tongue down my throat roughly and unbuttoned my pants. I was gasping for air as I squeezed his arms with my hands trying to pry myself away. I managed to shove him off me and scramble to the other side of the truck out of breath with tears in my eyes. He laughed and continued to drive me home as I cowered into the passenger door.
Sebby shut off his truck and looked over at me. “Why are you so sensitive Elijah? You’re so tantalizing I can’t keep my dick under control I just want you now.” My breathing was still very fast one of the kind of a scared small animal. “Why are you so invading? I don’t even know you and I can’t even relax” I countered back in a snappy voice, I knew it wasn’t that good of a comeback; I was never that good at it. He just stared and he told me to get out of his truck I more than willingly stumbled out and practically ran to my front door. “I’ll be seeing a lot more of you, you can count on that.” He yelled from his sleek red truck.

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High School Fantasy…wait Reality?

Sam finds himself in a place he never thought he would be, or was he supposed to be there all along? Please give feedback whether or not to continue this story, thank you, and enjoy!

New Girl in Town – Chapter 1

Sam is tired of his boring life and one day that changes. Please give any type of feedback whether or not you would like more chapters. Thank you and enjoy!

Dreams Do Cum True

Cole “Copper” Cooper’s future just changed…and for the better. Please enjoy, if you would like a part 2 and so on please comment below!