My Life. Ch. 2…
The next morning and the rest of the weekend..
The next morning and the rest of the weekend..
hi, i am aneesh 26 working in a bpo. my girlfriend is reena
This is a new series of stories. This, being the first, took place two years after my last experience with Derek. I am now 16.
Friends of my perents seduce my wife while we are on vaction
This story is based on true events.
a boat load of fun
how i got the best sex ever with my milf landlady.
A daughter asks for dad’s help, with unintended consequenses
18 year old college student Erika becomes a sex slave
Story originally posted by black darth on literotica but it was sadly removed.
A story of my favorite “Fuck Toy Friday”.
When he discovers that he is a sadist and his love likes to be spanked, pleasure ensues!
This april it was my birthday and after going fishing with my dad my girlfriend came over to see me. She had bought me a sex dot to dot book and a pocket karma sutra book for my birthday which made me giggle and turnt me on. I hopped in the shower because i had been out all day then went back to my room wearing nothing but a towel n some boxers. I went back to my room and before i knew it i my girlfriend was stood next to my bed and undressing herself. As she removed more clothes i could feel my dick get hard as i realised she had bought a brand new pair of red panties and a beautiful red bra to match. The best bit by far was the stockings and black suspender set she wore which made me go crazy. She lay beside me and asked if i wanted a massage which obviously i did! She poured the oil onto my back and knelt on my back while she massaged my shoulders and back. Usually i love back rubs but this time i was far to busy trying to turn over so i could grab her pussy and tits. I managed to get onto my back and pulled her pussy up to my face . I began to kiss her panties and could feel her wet lips through the fabric. I moved the material and started licking her shaven pussy and sweet clit. I then got up and was licking and biting her nipples which were hard but absolutely perfect. I lay back on the bed and she did the same so we were facing eachother and touching ourselves. I grabbed my phone and videoed her rubbing her clit and fingering herself. I could feel my dick swelling in my boxers and soon she was sucking my head and nibbling my shaft. My cock pumped and swelled in her mouth and i could feel myself getting more and more turnt on. After a little while i used a vibrating cock ring to massage her now wet clit. Once she was moaning and breathing heavily i put the ring on and became to lick and suck her sweet clit. She was really wet by now so i knelt back and slid my dick into her. We started fucking and i got faster and faster, egged on by her moaning and breathing. I could feel her nails scrathcing my back and the warm pain made me crazy. As she did this she bit my neck and chest and stroked my biceps and bit them too. The pain of her teeth digging into my flesh made me ho crazy and by now i was fucking her harder and faster with the cock ring turnt on. She could feel the vibrations through my hard penis inside her and her eyes rolled back into her head and she moaned deeply inbetween trying to catch her breath. After a while i withdrew myself and came all over her stomach and perfect tits. Once we had cleaned up we decided to have a little break and lay there chatting. However within a few minutes we found ourselves masturbating each other again. I began to fuck her again as i felt her tight pussy muscles sqeeze my hard cock. She let out a particularly loud groan . Thinking i had caused her pain i whispered ” are you ok?” she lookes at me and moaned ” you hit my cervix!!!” with a big smile across her face. she enjoyed that more than anything and we carried on. Once again i withdrew and came on her tits as she carried on rubbing her clit and moaning.. Her pussy was still very wet and again within a few minutes i found myself fingering her and licking her beautiful lips and flicking her clit with my tounge. We carried on masturbating and watching eachother and as she came inbetween my fingers i released my third load all over her. Her clit and lips were soaked and my dick was so hard. After, she told me i had made her come five times!! Three of which were through penetration! She is brilliant when it comes to sex and gives perfect blowjobs and has such a great body but this was something else entirely! She later described the sex as mind blowing ! And proceeded to tell her friends who were all very impressed by the amount of orgasms. a few days later she came over again when my mate was over and we all ended up on my bed again naked while we all masturbated ourselves and she sucked us and i licked her out again. She is always very horny and is up for anything kinky. A few days before she made me come whilst we were sat on the sofa watching tv and my mum was eating tea in the other room. She gave me great head and swallowed my load again. She came over at the end of the week and we shared a bath and wanked eachother again. I used the vibrating ring again on her clit while i licked her and applied tingle lube to her. We then both lay back on the sofa and masturbated with the lube while watchin a movie together and glancing at the other person rubbing and wanking themselves from time to time until once again we came. I licked her clit and spelt things with my tounge like ‘i love you’ and ‘your pussy is perfect’. She really responded to this with moans and deep breaths and when i whispered what i had spelt she giggled and continued to moan. All the sessions above happened last week. It was a very VERY good week and was the best sex ive ever had. She loved it as much as i did and the four quid i spent on the ring was worth every penny!
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Ricardo Responds!
I have had many comments and queries left at the foot of my stories on this site. Of the comments, some have been rude and insulting but for the most part they have been encouraging or even flattering. I read every comment made, maybe not immediately, but I check through all my stories at least once every week or so. I try to respond to most of these comments, and indeed, have developed quite an on-going correspondence with some of my regular readers! I do tend to lose my temper with some of the rude and insulting comments and have, in some cases, written back with some rather vitriolic responses of my own!
I have no objection to criticism; on the contrary, I rather welcome it. If a reader doesn’t like my story he can either go away muttering about how awful/unrealistic/crap it was or he write a comment and tell me. If he chooses the latter course of action then he brings his comment into the public domain and I then have the right and the opportunity to respond and defend my story or accept the critiscism. If this is all conducted in a civilised manner and I can see that the critiscism is justified then I’ll probably write back and tell my correspondent so; I may even re-issue the story in an amended version or make sure other stories are treated in the manner suggested. On the other hand, if the reader can see a development or sequel which might be brought into play at a later date, then I should welcome his or her views. If it seems a good idea and fits in with my style, then I’ll certainly use it. I’ll also credit any reader with the suggestion at the head of the story (see ‘Mother’s Girl 2’). If I receive a suggestion which doesn’t fit in with my style then I’ll tell you that as well. One reader is constantly suggesting events which could happen in future stories concerning some of my existing characters. Unfortunately, they are rather too blunt for me, but the guy certainly has a vivid imagination and I’ve suggested he should write the stories himself! I don’t mean this to sound rude. He has the ideas; why give them to someone else?!
At the head of this text, I spoke of comments and queries. By far the most common query has been from readers who would like to write their own stories, who have asked me how to write. It’s this aspect which has prompted me to compose this particular piece. I don’t suppose it is going to do much for my overall ‘score’ or indeed give this piece a starring role in the ‘best ever’ category, but I get so much enjoyment writing these stories (it’s a diversion from the writing I do in ‘my other life’ away from this site) that I would like to encourage others to ‘have a go!’
How do you start? Well, in general fiction, that might be difficult, but on this site, the content is already broadly defined for you isn’t it? You must have an interest in the subject because that’s why you are surfing here anyway! You feel the need to write erotic fiction and there’s probably one particular category that interests you more than others, so you start with that. In my case, I’ve always been turned on by Corporal Punishment (CP) so that’s what my early stories were all about. I have a very broad and erotic imagination and so ideas have never been a problem, but I’ll make a confession here which may be of use to you………….
CP readership is dedicated but limited. One day, I decided to research the site to see what the subject matter was for those stories which seem to really take off and so I read all those which were approaching, at the time, the 100,000 readership mark. I discovered that they were what I should categorise as ‘on the edge’ themes, and the most common of these seemed to be ‘incest’. I am more broadminded than most but a lot of those ‘edge’ themes are too much for me. I’d feel uneasy writing about such subjects and I decided to leave them well alone, but although the practice of incest is a crime, I for one, have felt turned on by close female members of my family from my teen years upwards as I suspect have most members of the human race! Surely it’s better to get it out of your system through fantasy? After all, our womenfolk are sexually mature members of our own species and as such are available as the objects of active male (or female) sexual desire by any non family member. If, when I was at school, a teenaged school friend got an erection at the thought of fucking my Mother, then why shouldn’t I also get one at the same thought! I don’t have to tell Mother what I’m thinking, do I? And I’m sure my school friend won’t tell her how he feels! (Nor what he does under the bedclothes every night while thinking about her!)
With these ideas buzzing round in my head, I decided to write a story with incest as it’s central theme (although there’s a little bit of spanking as well!) and the result was ‘Keep it in the family’ which has far outstripped everything else I’ve written. Its approaching a readership of 30,000 whereas my most read CP story (‘Her first thrashing’ ) which has been around for much longer, has only about half that.
Another thought occurs to me here. It’s essential to get the title correct. ‘her first thrashing’
was originally written as ‘in the gymnasium’, but for a reason I’ll go into in next, I decided this didn’t have enough impact; furthermore, it didn’t give an instant clue as to what the story was about. This ‘impact’ thing I spoke of; One of my early stories (and I mean written years before I discovered XNXX) I called ‘OTK and the Aftermath’ (it originally appeared on a dedicated CP site)and that’s how it appeared on this site. I submitted with two others which rapidly outstripped it in ‘reads’ I asked the webmaster for permission to re-title it, but this apparently cannot be done. I came to the conclusion that the title was meaningless to readers not into CP (OTK means ‘Over the Knee’) and so I decided to conduct a little experiment. I made a slight edit to the story, put an explanatory paragraph in at the start and re-submitted it as ‘A good hard spanking for Sue!’ Nobody could have any doubts what that was about, could they? As I write this, the story in its original format has been read 5012 times and has had ‘no comments’ but the new version has had 7152 reads and has attracted 6 comments! Point made, I think!
So, what do you need to write a story? You must have imagination. Without it, you’re going nowhere (although many of my stories have their roots in truth ….. something genuinly from my past eg ‘In at the deep end’ ….. my school was like that! and ‘Six of the best’ was based on a story told me by a former girlfriend about an actual event at her school) You must be able to express yourself in word pictures. I liken it to imagining a scene like a stage set. Could be a school, an office, your own (or a previous) house, a leafy glade, your car …..anywhere. I then work out the characters who will appear on my ‘stage’, drop them down on it, and see where they go to! Are you writing in the first or third person? If it’s the former are you telling this as yourself? If you are; are you writing AS yourself or someone else… I sometimes write as my female ‘alter ego’ Rachael and sometimes as an un-named 25 year old lesbian in the ‘Mother’s Girl’ stories. All adds to the challenge! And another thing; with what degree of intamcy are you going to address your audience? At the beginning of this piece I adopted an impersonal style adressing my readership in the abstract, but when I’d written three paragraphs and began to answer that question ‘How do I start?’, then I switch to a much more personal and intimate way of address …. almost as if we were enjoying a quiet drink together and I was giving a good friend a bit of advice!
Right! Imagine that you’re telling yourself a story; try to imagine the dialogue and make it realistic. Don’t over emphasise the dialogue part; you’re not writing a play and you’ll slow the action down (Its OK in longer stories but not in these). Try to see both sides of the conversation if you do insert dialogue. One sided speech is very obvious. Don’t drag the story line out. In most cases a short story will have more impact than pages of waffle. Think what sort of audience you hope to attract (and what use they will probably make of your story ………. Don’t be shy …. We’re all sexually active animals)
Above all.. HAVE FUN ……… nothing you write in this genre is going to win you the Booker Prize! Enjoy the experience of giving others a pleasant quarter of an hour or so!
Ricardo
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My first story, so I hope it goes over well 🙂 I guess we’ll see. “***” Marks a change in point of veiw.
Lauren meets Janice and has a passionate first lesbian experience with Janice.
For 14 years I fantasized about my mother-in-law, finally I get the chance of a lifetime
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The four of us laid there on the ground for a while, trying to catch our breath. The fire started to die out, so we dumped a bucket of water on it and went inside the cabin and went to bed. Walking inside, Rob said, “Man, I am going to sleep good tonight. I plan on sleeping in tomorrow too so if any of you fuckers get the bright idea to wake me up before ten, there will be hell to pay.”
“Yes sir,” Kristen said to him.
There were two rooms and a bathroom upstairs. Jenny and I waited for Rob and Kristen to go upstairs, first. “I’ll be right there,” I told Jenny. “I’m just going to lock the doors.”
“Why? It’s not like anyone is going to come in. You said there is no one around for miles right?”
“Yeah, I don’t know why I do that. Just a habit I guess.” I walked to the front door, locked it, and started to walk upstairs.
“Can you get me a cup of water Bri? I’m kinda thirsty,” Jenny asked me.
“Yeah, sure.” I turned around, went to the kitchen, got the water and went upstairs. When I walked past Rob and Kristen’s room, the door was open about six inches. I slowly walked by and saw them standing by the bed, kissing and taking each other’s clothes off. I looked in at Jenny and motioned for her to come here.
“What?” She whispered as she stood up off the bed and walked toward me.
“Look,” I nodded to the other room. “I guess they haven’t had enough yet, huh?”
“Guess not. Come on, I’m really tired. That’s hot and all but I really just want to go to bed.”
I turned and walked to our room and closed the door behind me. Jenny started to undress as I walked up to her. By the time I got to her, she was standing there naked, just looking at me. “What?” I asked her as I started to take my shirt off.
“Nothing, I just like showing my body off to you. Is that OK with you? I mean, you like my body don’t you?”
“Of course I do. You’re perfect. Why do you ask?”
“I don’t know. I guess I just needed the reassurance.” She leaned her head toward me and kissed me. I wrapped my arms around her as we kissed and pressed our naked bodies together. “Come on, let’s get some sleep.” Jenny climbed into bed on the near side, making me climb over her to get to the other side. As I climbed over her, my non-erect penis brushed against her flat stomach. “Hmmmm,” she said.
“What? Really? Jenny you know I can’t resist having you, but I really want to get some sleep.”
“OK,” she said, semi-reluctantly, and turned onto her side. I moved in behind her in the spooning position, wrapping my arm around her. She grabbed my hand and pulled my arm tighter around her. I moved in closer to her naked body with mine, positioning my cock between her ass cheeks and we fell asleep.
I opened my eyes to see that it was light out, but I didn’t have my watch so I couldn’t tell what time it was. Jenny must have felt my subtle movements because she groaned and moved her butt closer to me. As she did this, she pressed my morning wood into her ass. “Well, I see someone is awake and happy to see me.”
“Yeah, sorry ‘bout that.”
“Nothin’ to be sorry about.” She smiled at me and I leaned down to kiss her. “But there seems to be this problem.” Jenny reached down, grabbed my hard-on and stuck it down between her legs. I felt her warmth and her pussy was moist on the top of my shaft. I moved my hand up her stomach to her breast. Her hand let go of my dick and she reached it up around my neck, pulling my head closer to hers. She placed my mouth on the base of her neck. I softly kissed her neck as I started to hump my hardening cock against her pussy. Jenny started to let out soft moans as I lightly pinched and pulled on her nipples. While one hand stayed on the back of my head, holding it where she wanted it, her other hand reached down between her legs. As I humped her, I could feel her fingers on her clit, rubbing it. I removed my hand from her breast and placed it on her left inner thigh. I pulled her leg up, spreading her legs apart. She knew what I was doing because shortly after I spread her legs apart, she rolled her hips back, and, on the next hump, pushed the head of my erection into her wet pussy. I slid down on the bed to get a better entrance angle into her slit. She put her left foot behind her right knee giving me free access to her crotch. Her hand was still on her clit, rubbing it as I entered her fully. “Oh my God Brian,” she moaned as I pushed farther into her. I slid all the way out, letting my cock lay on her leg. She grabbed me again, and inserted me into her. “Don’t stop Bri. It feels so good. I love the feeling of you inside me.”
I pulled out again, but this time as she reached for my cock, I pulled back and grabbed it myself. I rubbed the head against her wet pussy, taking the juices from it and covering the tip of my dick. I moved my cock higher up and rested it at the entrance of her ass. “Can I?”
“Yeah, but go slow.” I brought my hand up, licked my fingers so they were nice and wet, brought my hand back to her ass hole, and inserted one finger into her. “Oohh!” she moaned again. I moved my finger around in her ass, trying to loosen it up a little. “OK, do it. Stick your dick in me.”
I pulled my finger out, rubbed the head of my cock against her pussy again to get it wet, and positioned myself at the entrance of her ass again. I started to push, “Damn that’s tight. Is it OK?”
“Yeah, it’s really tight, you just gotta keep pushing. It’ll go.” I pushed a little harder and I felt Jenny relax her ass a bit. The head of my cock started to go in. I put it half way in and pulled it back out. I did this a couple more times, then I felt that “pop” of my head entering her ass. “OK, hold on.” Her ass was so tight I thought the head of my prick was going to fall off. “I just need to relax. OK, push it in me. Fuck my ass Brian.”
I pushed into her ass again, slowly. She brought her hand up to her mouth, licked her fingers so they were wet, then brought her hand back to my shaft and rubbed her spit around my hard-on. This lubed my dick up nicely, Jenny relaxed, and I inserted my cock all the way into her. She started to scream so she covered her head with the pillow, trying not to wake up Rob and Kristen. I kept slowly pumping in and out of her ass as I reached my hand around and started to rub her clit. Jenny started to moan more and louder into the pillow. She reached her hand down to my ass, grabbed it digging her nails into me and pulled me far into her ass. The more I fucked her ass, the more she moaned and the louder she got.
Jenny was trying so hard to be quiet with her head in the pillow; she didn’t notice Kristen standing in the doorway. I made eye contact with Kristen. She was wide-eyed, staring at my cock in Jenny’s ass. I asked, “Do you like that?”
Not knowing I was asking Kristen, Jenny said, “Oh fuck yeah. I love your cock in my ass. Fuck me harder Brian.”
Kristen nodded her head. Her hands moved around her body. One hand going up to her tits and the other hand went down to her crotch. The rooms were positioned so you could see the doorway to the other room from each bed, but that was all you could see. I heard Rob get up. He walked over behind Kristen and started to “help” her with her hands. They were both naked so they must have slept naked too. Rob started humping Kristen from behind. I looked back to Jenny as I kept fucking her ass. She still had her head buried in the pillow, yelling and screaming out of ecstasy into it. I moved my hand back to her chest and pinched her nipples again.
I looked back at Rob and Kristen. Rob grabbed Kristen, turned her sideways in the doorway, and bent her over at the waist. He grabbed his cock, and guided it toward her pussy. I could see the pleasure on her face as he entered him. Kristen still had her eyes fixed on my cock going in and out of her friend’s ass, but was overcome with pleasure from Rob’s cock inside her. I leaned back down to kiss Jenny’s neck again and as I did this, she picked her head up and saw Rob and Kristen fucking in the doorway. “Oh my. Look what you’ve started,” Jenny said, between moans.
“Yeah, I guess WE did start something huh?” I reached back down to her wet pussy, rubbed her clit a little and inserted my finger into her wet slit as I pushed my cock as far as I could into her ass.
“Oh my God!” Jenny yelled. “I’m glad I don’t have to be quiet anymore because HOLY SHIT that feels great Brian!” I felt Jenny tighten up her ass around my cock. I pulled my fingers out and rubbed her clit again. Then I pulled my dick out of her ass and stuck it into her pussy. It slid in with ease, her juices surrounding my shaft. I pushed into her hard and fast. I didn’t think she was expecting that because she jolted up and screamed again. I reached around, grabbed her right leg and rolled onto my back so she was sitting up on me facing Rob and Kristen. We moved back on the bed so I was leaning on the head board and Jenny was riding my cock reverse-cowgirl style. She brought her hands up and grabbed her tits as I grabbed her hips. I was moving her back and forth. I looked over her shoulder at Rob and Kristen. They were really going at it in the doorway. Rob had a hold of Kristen’s hips and was thrusting hard into her pussy from behind. He moved one hand up to her chest and grabbed a hold of her tits. Kristen still had both hands on the door frame to support herself against Rob fucking her.
“Put it back in my ass,” Jenny told me. I pulled her up so my cock slid out of her pussy. She grabbed my cock, and sat back on my dick taking my whole length into her now relaxed ass hole. One of her hands went back down to her crotch and started playing with her pussy again. My hands stayed on her hips, rocking her back and forth, up and down on my hard-on. I could feel my balls start to tighten up now. I looked back at Rob and Kristen. They had turned so they were facing directly toward us. Kristen had one hand on either side of the door frame and Rob was still fucking her from behind. He was going harder now, causing Kristen to lurch forward with each pump of his cock. She would let out little screams each time Rob thrust his shaft into her.
My focus turned back to Jenny. She was now bouncing up and down on my shaft. When she came down, she did it so hard and fast that the entire length of my cock went into her and her ass slapped against me. She was moaning even louder. “My God Brian, that feels so good. I think I’m gonna cum! I’m gonna cum! Fuck my ass!” I pushed up as she came down, her ass tightened around me as I felt my balls fill up. I heard Kristen start yelling the same thing as Rob was moaning louder as well. Kristen let out a loud scream of pleasure, grabbed the door frame and froze as Rob pumped his load into her.
Jenny and I were watching, and shortly after, I squeezed Jenny’s hips, pushed hard into her and let my wad blow in her ass. She tightened up her ass around my exploding cock, screamed and then held her breath. Jenny was shaking almost violently on top of me. She leaned back, turned her face toward mine and kissed me. “Oh my God Brian. That was amazing. I’ve never had anal sex before, but after that orgasm, I think you are going to have to do that to me again.”
“Babe, I’m exhausted. Can we wait a while?” I asked her.
“Yeah, let’s eat some breakfast and then we’ll fuck again. Geez that felt good!” Jenny pushed herself up off of my cock, and got off the bed. I looked up at Kristen and Rob. They were still standing there, Rob’s dick in Kristen, kissing each other and rubbing each other’s body. Jenny walked up to them, trying to get out of the door, grabbed Kristen’s breast, “Excuse me you two. I’m gonna go make some breakfast. If you want to come eat, you gotta pull yourself out of her cunt Rob.”
“Yeah, we’ll be down in a minute.” Not pulling himself out, they walked back to their room and laid on the bed in the spooning position. Jenny motioned for me to come see what they were doing. I got up out of the bed and walked over beside her. I looked into their room and sure enough, they were going at it again.
I leaned over and whispered in Jenny’s ear, “I thought you were going to go make breakfast?”
“I was, but I can’t pass this up. Can you believe that? Those two just got done fucking and they’re already going at it again. Damn!” Jenny grabbed my hand and interlaced her fingers in mine.
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The account of my first time with a guy when I was a very horny 14 year old. All dressed up in my sisters school uniform, I gave my much older neighbours my oral virginity
How they all cum together
The first time I saw you
My heart skipped, I shook inside
And you turned, and smiled
I felt warm, when your
Body pressed mine and
Our arms took each other in
The first time our hands touched
They flashed in the light
As I turned them over
They tightened and cradled
They pressed and clung
And felt desire
The first time I touched your bare skin
Sensations of cream and velvet
Invaded my mind and body
My desire stood tall in it’s shadow
My own fire fanned by
Your cool soft flesh
The first time I saw your
Naked body next to me
I stared in wonder
Of why you were there
And how I could feel more of you against me
Where it would lead
When it would end…
The first time we made love
Nothing else mattered…
You willingly accepted
What I had to offer
and our tension soared
and our excitement flashed
and then we were gone…
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the second in the series of the slavery of women in the future