This is a better version same story only easier to read. I added spaces, and paragraphs so hopefully it helps. ^^ I still would like the critique.

There I was yet again. Laying in the middle of my queen sized bed dripping warm juices onto my poor sheets. The sweet thick smell of cum was in the air and only my small sharp breathing could be heard. I just couldn’t help myself any more. The needs for relief were becoming more demanding since I turned twenty. I don’t know why now because I figured I would have had my sex drive kick in at fifteen. I guess it’s just me. I couldn’t help but wonder if other girls had this problem. All these needs and easily being aroused. Like pushing an on button. I could feel my legs tremble and shiver as the once warm cum turned cold. It was as if I was sitting in a frozen lake. Slowly I allowed myself to stand and grab my night dress.
I wish I could just walk to the rest room like this but seeing as I’m still in my parents’ house I can’t. I mean how would I explain to dad or mom why I was walking around nude. “I needed a nice fuck but had finger frenzy instead.” Oh yeah right. That would be the death of me. Mom would try to kick me out of the house for some sort of “reality check” and I am not too sure what dad would do. I can see him now standing in the hallway beat red with his towel in hand. Actually my father didn’t seem to be the kind of man to admit he was turned on easily. It seemed like he would never admit to such a thing no matter how hard any one would push. As for my big brother Jay on the other hand that’s a different story.
He always would tell me about his latest crush or one night stand. My parents allowed him out since he was almost done with college and getting ready to move out. Trying to stay quiet I walked to the restroom with my towel in hand. I close the door and easily strip off my dress turning on hot water. Even though I just finished I started playing and touching my swollen pussy again. It was warm and drenched in juices just waiting for a nice hard cock. I looked around for something I could use as a substitute but there was nothing. Sighing I sit on the toilet and spread my legs open. Slowly I insert my fingers and start thrusting into myself. I moaned and my breathing picked up. I was trying so hard to be quiet but I’m sure it was a little louder then I would have liked. I groaned and pinched and pulled my nipple rubbing and playing with my breast as my fingers pumped and twirled in my pussy.
Right as I was feeling the usual twitching and throbbing from my clit I looked toward the door. It was budged open a bit and I stopped suddenly. I could have sworn I closed it all the way. There was a loud thud and I heard footsteps scurrying away. A door closed and I was sitting there in shock. I stood and closed the door. Oh my god, someone was watching me! Who the hell was it though! Was it Jay or my dad? My thoughts were scrambled and I put on my clothes. Imagining my dad watching me made me shiver. Am I getting horny over this? There’s no way! But of course there I was again my pussy aching and my nipples out. I was getting horny from thinking my dad was watching me. It could have been Jay though to. I yawned and put my dress back on and quickly slipped into my room. Making sure to lock the door behind me, I laid in bed and was overcome from thoughts. This is something I need to figure out. In the morning in getting to the bottom of this I thought to myself as I drifted to sleep.

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I woke up from the sounds of feet shuffling around in the kitchen. It was morning and I was plotting ways I could test my father to see if he was my peeper. I could hear mom in the kitchen singing some weird songs about cooking breakfast. Jay was in there talking to my dad. I couldn’t hear word for word but I could hear enough to make out he wasn’t sure if he was ready to move. That’s weird I thought to myself. Why now all of a sudden does he not want to move out? Maybe my peeper really is Jay. I felt my heart sink a little thinking it wasn’t my father. Looking around my pitch dark room I decided it was time to get up. My stomach was growling and I was thirsty. I fumbled around my night stand to turn on a lamp and slowly stood up from my wonderland of blankets and pillows. My room was covered with black blankets because I was more of a night owl. I hated mornings more then anything else. I slid on my favorite red thong and my push up bra making sure it was tightened. I wasn’t to see if I could catch one of them checking me out. That at least would give me an idea. I slid on my tight jeans and threw on my wife beater. Looking at myself in the mirror I could tell my breasts and cleavage was just enough to be ok to wear around mom. My ass looked like I had to stuff it in just so it could fit. I combed through my hair and let it lay on my shoulders like it normally would. I didn’t want to get to over dressed because it would raise too many questions. I put on my deodorant and sprayed my favorite perfume. I didn’t use it often but I figured it was about time.
There was a knock on my door and I almost fell over in surprise. “Lilly, do you plan on waking up sometime today?” my mother asked in her sarcastic tone. “I am awake mom I’m coming.” I tried to not sound too annoyed because it would only make her more sarcastic. “Good I made you eggs and pancakes. Me and your father have to go to the store do you want to come?” I thought about it. I did want to go because I needed more energy drinks for my game night coming up. But this could be my chance to see if it was Jay. “No I’m not feeling too well, can you please grab me some monsters though please.” I asked realizing I would have to change into sweats because mom would know something was up. “For your damn game or school.” Rolling my eyes I quickly ripped off my jeans and pulled on some baggy sweats. “Both mom.” I walked to my door and unlocked it. Opening it to see my mother’s “not another game frenzy face” Sighing I gave her a hug and told her it was for school and that I loved her.
“Alright then were off, you two behave and no messes today please.” Just like that I heard my dad go outside and my mom left my door to the front door. Yawning and stretching I walked into the kitchen. Jay was sitting in his usual spot munching on his food and looking at his phone. “Hey bro what’s up?” I asked trying to be casual like nothing was wrong. Deep inside I was nervous. I studied him a bit without realizing it. He was tall, and clean shaven. His body wasn’t supper ripped or muscular but I can tell he wasn’t weak either. He looked up at me with his normal smile. “Sup fucker what you doing” I laughed and shrugged my shoulders. I watched his eyes study my body for a few moments. He looked at breasts a bit longer than anything else and quickly went back to his phone. Maybe it really was Jay i thought to my self feeling my heart sink a little. I sat at the table and started eating. “So what’s this I hear about you not wanting to move out?” He looked up at me in shock and shrugged his shoulders. “Just don’t feel ready like I don’t have the funds yet.” I nodded and then before I could stop myself I heard myself asking, “What were you up to last night?”

My heart nearly stopped and I could feel my cheeks starting to blush. He looked up at me like a little kid caught stealing. I err wasn’t doing anything. Why? I could barely answer. My heart was beating fast and I could feel my pussy beginning to warm up. I was doing nothing. He looked at my breasts again and his face flushed. My pussy started to get wet and I could feel my nipples beginning to get hard. It was hard to not imagine what my big brothers dick looked like. I think he could smell my arousal because next thing I know he raised an eyebrow. So um, what are you thinking about? I brushed my hand through my hair and tried to make an excuse to get away from him. Nothing I’m not feeling well, I’ll be going back to bed now. He laughed and looked back at his phone. Just don’t die in there alight? There’s more to life then games! What the hell was that suppose to mean? Did he know I was getting horny from him? Rolling my eyes I pushed my plate at him and stood to go to my room. Eat my food for me you know how mom gets. He smiled and nodded his head. Walking past him I happened to look down into his lap and was shocked by what I saw.
Racing into my room I close my door and jumped into bed. He…he was hard! What the fuck is even happening. That’s my bro I can’t do anything with him! I can be thinking like this…I sighed and slowly let my hand slide down into my sweats. I was starting to rub my swollen clit and felt shivers crawling up my spine. But it’s such a rush. What do I do about this? I couldn’t take anymore, I ripped off my sweats and thong tossing them to the floor. I need to fucking masturbate again. I felt my pussy throbbing with the very touch of my fingers. My breath grew deeper and heavier. I need this; I need this more than anything I thought to myself. Before I could realize it I was going at my pussy like mad, exposing my soft shaven wet folds to the room. I bit my bottom lip to keep myself from moaning. Then my heart stopped. The door swung open and there stood Jay his face still in his phone. Holy Fuck! I grabbed my blankets and covered myself as fast I could. What the fuck do you think you’re doing in here!
He looked startled. I was going to ask if you wanted to go with me to Game Stop. He face turned beat red when he saw my sweats and bright red thong in front of him. What the fuck are you doing?! He looked at me concerned and walked over to the bed. Are you fucking masturbating right now! I felt my heart start to race as it hit the floor in fear, No well why do you care just get out! I threw my pillow at him and he started laughing. Oh my god Lilly I never thought I would catch you fucking yourself! I always thought you would catch me! This is priceless! My little sis, finger fucking herself! But to what? Or who huh? He stood there with this look of pride on his face. I groaned and tried hiding under my blankets. I could hear him moving around and then the door shut. Thank fucking god I muffled under my breath as I laid there hidden in my blankets. But then I felt someone on my bed. Oh hell no, oh my god what is he doing! I popped my head up from my blankets to see my big brother sitting on my bed. What do you think you’re doing in here still? I glared at him and he smiled. I’m going to help you out sis. I know you need it. My heart nearly stooped and smashed into my floor yet again in fear. Wait, what? He stood up and walked to my side of the bed. He looked at me with lust filled eyes. I knew I was in trouble right then and there. He stripped off his shorts. I felt my cheeks getting hot and my pussy throbbing in excitement. Oh my god Jay what the hell are you thinking! We can’t bro oh my god! He grabbed my hand and placed it on his hard cock. It was so smooth and thick. I slowly found myself stroking him in awe. He looked down at me and smiled. Its fine it’ll be our secret ok? I need this, and as of right now I know you do. I almost couldn’t believe what I was hearing but my body wouldn’t let me stop. I was overrun with confusion, lust, and emotions.
I never knew I would have such a thrill from touching his cock. He pulled my blankets off me flashing him my wet soaked pink pussy. She smiled and grabbed my hips dragging them in front of him. Ahh you could have just asked damnit I said as I was turned. He stroked his cock and traced my wet lips with it. I moaned and through my head back into the pillows. Do you want it Lil? Tell me you want my cock! I blushed and groaned. I…I want your cock Jay. I can’t take being this horny anymore. Please fuck me! I was almost shocked to hear the words fall from my mouth. He traced around my hard clit with the tip of his cock. I felt like I was on the verge of exploding. Damn Lil your clit is swollen like a damn rock. I guess you really do need your big bros cock in you! I blushed in a bit of embarrassment. Shut up Jay and just fuck me already! I couldn’t take anymore my hips were bucking at his cock wanting it inside.
He stripped off my shirt and threw it somewhere. He traced my pussy entrance for a bit as I removed my bra. Damn Lil your boobs are fucking amazing! I felt myself shiver. Are you going you do it or not Jay? I didn’t mean to get so irritated but i was already sexually frustrated and I could tell he was trying to tease me. He didn’t waste any more time and shoved his cock full speed inside my wet pussy. It felt so amazing I nearly came right there. His cock was so thick and rock solid. My pussy twitched with each of his thrusts wanting more and more. I felt my breasts bounce fearlessly as he pounded me hard. I moaned and clawed my sheets. Ahh fuck Jay please don’t stop! He was moaning now and breathing hard. Fuck Lil why are you so tight! He lifted my ass into the air and pounded harder into me. I could hear the loud smacking from his balls onto my ass. I never felt so good I made my ass higher and thrusted in sync with him. I could feel his cock hitting into my uterus but I didn’t care. I loved being helpless in doggy. .
MMMmmm that’s it Lil show me that ass! He said as he slapped my ass cheek nice and hard. I was going to have a red mark i could tell from the stinging but it felt so good! I was scared thinking he was going to shove it into my ass but he didn’t. Instead he grabbed both of my nipples and tugged on them and he slammed his way in again. I could feel his cock twitching inside me. My pussy was about ready to ooze but swallowed his cock. I moaned and groaned wanting more and more. Fuck jay lay down! I want to ride you! I blushed and he stopped pulling out slowly. He laid on the bed and smiled at me. Alright Lil go ahead. I blushed looking at his amazing cock. It had such thickness and size. I crawled over him and gave it a lick. He moaned in shock and trusted up into my mouth. I licked and sucked slowly loving my big brothers cock being in my mouth. I wanted more of my big brother. I wanted his cum. I flickered and traced my tongue around his cock sucking harder. I massaged his balls and started taking him deeper and deeper.
He moaned and wrapped his hand behind my head. He made me bop up and down on his cock making sure i was taking every inch in. Fuck Lil, just ride me or ill cum! I blushed and sucked harder. He pulled my head off his cock and grabbed my waist positioning over his cock. Fucking shit women just fuck me already! I blushed at his words and positioned my wet pussy over his cock. It slid in perfectly as my pussy took in every inch making my body tingle and shiver. I started thrusting and bucking into him. I moaned and clawed into his chest. Oh fuck Jay! Oh Fuck! I was getting closer now. I could feel his cock twitching and shaking around. He moaned and gripped me tighter. Please cum Jay I want to feel it I blushed. He laughed and rolled us over so he was on top. He fucked me harder than before. I felt my pussy going raw and wet from his thrusts.. He moaned and played with my breasts. Lil cum for me! Cum on my cock! Those words made my whole body shiver and just like that my pussy shot out a warm stream of cum onto his cock. I screamed and felt my whole body going limp. He pulled out and shot a warm thick stream of cum over my belly and breasts.
He stroked a bit and laid next to me. Oh Lil, that was amazing! You’re so fucking tight its crazy! I blushed and tried catching my breath. Your, weren’t so bad yourself. I smiled and felt more bonding with my brother than ever before. We can’t tell anyone about this Jay. He laughed and nodded. We laid there in silence considering what we had just done. It felt like I was just fucked by the snake in the forbidden garden. He slowly got up and started grabbing his clothes. Mom and pop should be home any time now Lil. You better clean up before they do. I blushed and slowly got up. Alright Jay. He was right. It had felt like we were in there forever and mom and dad would be home soon.

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I could barely move my pussy was so raw. I slowly got up and gathered my clothes. It would be weird to mom if I changed while she was out. I grabbed a towel and went into the restroom. I closed the door but didn’t feel the need to lock it anymore. I was sure it was Jay who caught me last night. Why else would he fuck me so easily? I smiled feeling accomplished and finally relaxed. I didn’t know if Jay was planning on joining me but at this moment I didn’t care. I had no cares in the world. Who knew such a good fuck could be so powerful. I let the warm hot water ease its way onto my body. My legs were starting to get feeling again. My breasts felt swore and my pussy wasn’t throbbing anymore. It was raw still though. I could tell because I ran a finger against it and my whole body shivered and quaked. I could hear feet shuffling around outside the door and I couldn’t help but laugh. I figured Jay didn’t need to spy on me anymore. But what the hell. I softly rubbed soap onto my breasts and let it slide down my smooth stomach onto my pussy and down my thighs. I stood there for what seemed to be an eternity. After a while I decided it was time to get out and go back to having a somewhat normal life again.
I turned off the water and walked out of the tub. Wrapping my towel around me and gathering my clothes I opened the door. I stood there in shock. I felt my heart fall and fly back up, my body got goose bumps. Dads pocket watch lay in front of me. I quickly shuffled to my room. Oh my god..Was I wrong about Jay? Could it have been dad all along? This doesn’t make any sense! God dam it I thought I figured this shit out! If it was dad then why was Jay so willing to fuck me like he did? Maybe Jay was playing a joke me. Making me think crazy things so I would go back to him and he’d have another chance to fuck. But then again why wouldn’t dad have his pocket watch on him. I sighed and felt a large head ache coming on. I crawled under my blankets with no clothes, only my drenched towel. I didn’t care. I wouldn’t allow myself to ruin this perfect feeling. Mom and dad were home now though. I could hear mom shuffling things in the kitchen. I buried myself deeper in the blankets and curled into the fetal position. I don’t care.
I was trying to lie to myself. I imagined dad standing at the door his face red and him getting hard. I shook my head. No, no this is bad. I already fucked Jay I don’t need to think about this anymore. I mean its wrong isn’t it? Why would something so fucking wrong feel so damn blissful. I sighed and let my imagination run. I saw dad standing there in his boxers trying to b quiet and opening the door just enough to see me through the mirror. I felt my body getting shivers again. I could see him breathing hard and slowly reaching for his cock. I got chills imagining dad stroking off to me. I let out a small moan. Ugh I need to stop thinking like this. I just got fucked I shouldn’t be horny again! I stood up and put on my clothes. Fuck this I need to do something to get my mind off of this. I grabbed my controller and turned on my flat screen. Crawling back into bed I waited for my game to start. This should distract me for a good while. I played for a while until I heard mom calling my name. Pausing the game I slowly slunk my way to the door. “What?” I called out. I went to the kitchen and saw dinner ready. Holy shit how long was a playing? Mom looked at me with a bit of concern.
“Honey you look pale, do you need to go see the doctor?” I shook my head and sat in the chair. Dad was across from me and didn’t seem to be acting different. “How was your day honey?” He asked keeping his nose in some book of his. He was always reading or watching something. I shrugged and waited for my plate. He didn’t ask or do anything else. I guess Jay was fucking with me. He was sitting next to dad with a smug look on his face. He always had a smug look when he got laid. I rolled my eyes hoping mom wouldn’t ask him what was so great today. He let his smug go away and just smiled like normal. Mom served me a plate of meatloaf, corn, and mashed potatoes. I was starving and wasted no time chowing down. She looked at me and just laughed. I never knew you liked my food so much Hun. I just smiled and kept eating. I didn’t know how hungry I was until then. I almost forgot I didn’t eat this morning. There were just so many things going on in my head.
All about sex with dad, and Jay and who the fuck my peeper was. I figured I’d have to find out tonight. I’ll take a shower and keep an eye on the door this time. When I notice it budge ill wave that person to come inside and join me. It’s not the best plan but maybe it will work. I mean if it is dad maybe we can talk about it. Like why is he watching me and is it ok if I like it? I won’t tell him about me and Jay though. That’s seriously classified. If it’s Jay ill probably ask him to fuck me again. I know I would need it. At least that way I will know he was fucking with me. Or maybe dad just dropped while waiting to get into the restroom. I finished eating and even ate seconds. Mom was surprised with how much I ate but seemed happy about it. Dad and Jay had casual conversations about college, and moving and blah. I cleaned my plate and went to my room. I was going to have to wait until a little later when everyone was sleeping so I can take a shower. I decided to continue playing my games until it got later. Jay came in once to ask me if I would go to the store with him tomorrow to get some game. Of course I’d go I already missed going today. I heard mom heading towards her room so I assumed she was going to bed. I cheeked the time it was already midnight. Soon I head Jay saying he was going to go spend the night at someone’s house. Probably going to get laid again. I waited a little longer until I knew for sure Jay was gone. Dad was in the living room watching something on Netflix. I lowered my game so I could hear him better. Time passed by and the next thing I know the movie was over. I heard dad turning everything off and headed towards his room. This will be my big chance. If I get peeped on again I know for sure it wouldn’t be Jay because he was gone. I waited a little longer to make sure dad would be asleep and turned off my game.
I needed to get horny again first so I can masturbate without being nervous. I turned on some low music and put away my controller. I stripped off my clothes and laid in bed. I thought about what me and Jay did earlier. How good it felt to finally have some cock inside my pussy. It was such a rush but not in a romantic sense. I knew Jay was a whore so I didn’t fall for him thankfully. I felt my pussy starting to get warm and moist thinking what it would be like to fuck my dad. Would it more romantic? Or would I feel like I did with Jay? I imagined falling for my dad as he would caress and kiss my body. That’s all I needed to get myself started. I no longer wondered if what I thought or felt was wrong. I knew it was but I couldn’t care less. I figured threes no point stressing over loving to fuck your brother or wanting to fuck your dad. I reached down and teased my wet folds. I needed it again, I was wet and sticky. I traced my clit gently teasing and getting it excited. I got butterflies wondering if dad would even see me in the way I’m seeing him. Would he even want to fuck me if I asked? Or would he scorn me and rat me out to my mother. I was nervous but I knew I needed to do this.
I grabbed a towel and wrapped it tightly around my body. I didn’t bother putting on clothes this time. If mom were to see me I’d just say I was planning on showering. And as far as dad goes, maybe I’d get him excited enough to be able to tell if it’s him. I walked slowly and nervously to the shower. I closed the door all the way so I knew there was no confusion. I turned on the shower and stood in front of the mirror examining myself. For reason I no longer looked pale. In fact I looked great. My skin was shiny and my eyes were glowing with lust. I took in a deep breath and the towel slide down my body. My nipples were hard and my pussy was oozing juices excitedly. I touched my breast and rubbed it a little teasing myself. I walked into the shower let the warm hot water hit my body. I took a deep breath and watched the door. Nothing happened it didn’t budge or anything. I felt my heart sink a little in disappointment. I figured I would have been happy my dad wasn’t there. Instead I was sad because he wasn’t there. I wanted his attention.
Then suddenly I saw the knob jiggle. I tried to contain my excitement and looked away from the mirror. I grabbed my soap and let it run down my breasts. Making sudsy bubbles all over my body. I moaned just loud enough to be heard from the door and touched my pussy softly. I heard a low groan from the door and knew it was him for sure. I looked into the mirror and called him over with my finger. I rubbed my breasts harder moaning and making sexual faces. I worded come here daddy I want you with my mouth. I couldn’t say it but I knew he could lip read it. The door opened a little and there stood my dad. Cock in hand and face beat red. I moaned a little and opened the curtain. Daddy I want you please. I know you’re the one watching. He smiled and put his cock away. I looked disappointed. Am I not good enough anymore? He smiled. I’ll meet you in the room honey hopefully your mom hasn’t woken up. And just like that he left.

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