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Comforting after a break up

Hey, this is my first story, and its a kind of a true story. Basically after my first break-up, it’s the story of a friend who helped me get over it. Hope you like it.

Making Amy Wet

Making Amy WET
This story is based on true events, names changed and all.
I was in the office when a new girl was being introduced around. She was the new ‘East wing asst. mgr.’ I checked her out.
Damn, she was built nice. About 5’, nice hips, full tits, cute face, snowy blond hair, pulled back and curls down the back. She
dressed real nice, but not in a business suit. She had on a tight flowered blouse, puffy long sleeves, bright red tight slacks that
showed off her sexy shape. More of a ‘get shit done’ style, with a bunch of keys hanging off her side.
You could see her energy to do well, and no kidding around, all
business. When it came time to introduce me, the business office lady said, “This is Amy, she’s the new East wing asst. mgr. Amy, t
his is Jim. She flashed me a big smile as I shook her warm hand. Then I jerked my hand back and said, “AMY! Every ‘Amy’ I’ve
ever known was a pain in the ass! The office lady smacked me on the arm and smiled and said, “Don’t pay any attention to him!”,
then jabbed me in the ribs. Amy just kept smiling, but with a look, (you’ll be sorry you said that, wise guy!). I thought right then, I bet I can make her wet.
Later that day I was sitting outside taking a smoke break, when here she comes. Looking hotter than ever and came up to me.
“Shouldn’t you be working, Jim?” I looked at her as we both grinned. I put my hand on my heart and I said, “Yes Amy, I should,
but I’ve been waiting and waiting for you to walk by.”, and looked her up and down with a ’nice body’ look on my face. She tried to
be very professional, with her little horse power authority, but couldn’t help but grin a little. “I need some boxes moved in my
office, so after your break, report to my office,” still grinning but with a ‘so there, Mr. wise guy.’ look on her face. I stood up, a foot
taller than her and looked down at her cute face. I said, (hand on my heart again) ”Even though I don’t work for you, let’s go to your office now because I would do anything for you Amy.”
She got a little pink in the face , but I could tell she was suppressing a little grin. She put her hands on her hips with a ’he has to do what I say’ look, and said, “Follow me,”
I noticed her adding a extra little wiggle in her walk as I walked behind her. She was trying not to grin and put on a
professional look, you know, ‘all business’. We arrived at her hole in the wall office. It was a complete mess with everything not put
away and boxes every where. “Nice office, AMY,” I said, and started putting things away fast, She said she wanted this here, that
there and so on. I moved shit fast as she just watched and in no time had her office all neat. I looked up at her as she stood in the
doorway, arms folded and said, “You did a ‘fair’ job, try and be a little more careful with things, next time.” She raised one eyebrow at me and cocked her head with a ‘how did you like that, wise ass‘, look.
I smiled with a ‘fuck you lady’ look and I said in my best brown nosing voice, “Any time you need me for anything AMY, you just
page me, and I’ll be here as fast as I can.” She tried to not to grin again, but did, then quickly composed herself and said, “You can
run along now Jim. I’ll page you if I need you.” She stayed standing in the doorway as I turned sideways to pass, sucked in my
chest grinning and looking right at her beautiful tits. She couldn’t hold back and grinned with a red face as I inched past her. As I
went by her and turned, she swatted me on the ass!, and said, “Get out of here!”
As the days went by, I would steal a flower from other desks, and put them on Amy’s. I would put a candy bar in one of her
drawers. Anything I could find and sneak it into her office. Office supply’s, letter openers, notes that said, “Dear Amy, I” and nothing
more. I would pass her with my nose up in the air smiling and it would force her to grin when she didn‘t want to, and maintain her ‘all business‘ look.
Then I knew this was coming. I heard them page: ‘James report to Miss Mills office.’ (James? Oh how official.) With my cool
suppressed grin, I entered Amy’s office. She said “Sit down JAMES.” She tried to be so professional. She had on a blue blouse, nice and tight, so her tits would stick out nice, with shear light blue long sleeves, a dark blue skirt, and her blond hair pull up in the back.
She said, “James, have you been putting ’things’ in my office? “ Very straight faced. I said, “I wouldn’t do that Miss Mills, you
know that I have to much respect for you to play little games,”
She almost grinned, but kept her composure. She said, “I think
your a liar James, Glenda saw you enter this office yesterday, and I now I find some candy in my drawer.”
“OK, but (long pause) a
.a
 maybe
.I was just doing a favor for someone who likes you?”
“and who is this person James?”
“Oh Miss Mills, he’s very shy, and I wouldn’t want to say.”
“Is he tall?” (like me)
“Oh no, a little short guy”
“Does he have sandy blond hair?” (like mine)
“Oh no, he’s bald”
With that she grinned and leaned over to me, and whispered.
( your such a fucking liar!). Her cleavage was now looming in my
face. I look at it and smiled. She sat back up pink faced and fixed the front of her blouse. I said, “Maybe if you had lunch with the guy, he would stop putting ’things’ in your office?” She didn’t answer.
“I can see why he would bring you ’gifts’, your so professional, and business like, I’m sure he admires you a lot.”
She stood up, and I stood up. She closed her door and got in my
face with her hands on her hips. We just stood there looking in each others eyes, her trying her best to suppress her grin, but couldn’t. She whispered,
(“Look you, you said ’Amy’s’ are a pain in the ass. You’re the one that’s the pain in my ass. This ’Amy’ is Not a pain in the ass,
you sly fox. You WILL take me to lunch and I will tell all about me, and you’ll see I’m
., a
.) I just leaned forward and kissed
her. Her eyes went wide open in shock. She gasp. She couldn’t speak. She put her hand to her throat to catch her breath. I just
stood there looking in her blue eyes. She whispered, (why you brazen little shit!, When we go to lunch I’m going to set down
some rules for you! Rule number 1 is don’t you EVER kiss me at work!)
I whispered back, (“why, does it make you wet?)
If looks could kill I would be dead at that point. With an evil look and scowl she whispered loud, ( “I should slap your face! For
your information I have a boyfriend and I don’t need you to
”) I interrupted her and whispered, ( “damn your beautiful, he doesn’t
stand a chance with me around.”) She just glared at me. She said, “We have to talk mister, you be at that little caf?own at 2nd and
Vista streets at noon today!, and don’t be late!” I said,
“Yes Madam , oh, since we won’t be at work, can I kiss you there?” She got red in the face and said, “GO, get out of this office!” I left quickly and checked the time. 2 hours to go. I couldn’t stop thinking about her. Those tits, that ass, she was so hot.
What Amy didn’t know.
She didn’t know I was spying on her boss. A real asshole and selling company secrets we suspected. I actually worked for corp.
security, but was posing as “Office coordinator 7”, the highest so I could have access to all areas.
I got to the caf?irst and got a booth. Right on time Amy came in and sat down.
“Your buying, of course,” I said.
“NO, your buying me lunch, Mr. Trouble maker.”
“ OK, I am, you sure have beautiful eyes.”
“Never mind that, now pay attention to me.”
“I have been, a lot!”
“Do I have to really slap your face to get your attention?”
“Amy, you have broken the ‘Amy’s are a pain the ass’ curse on me. I think you’re the hottest girl I‘ve ever met.” She sat stunned for a minute, smiled and slowly shook her head, like, ‘your
impossible’
She said, “Your going to listen to me if it takes all night! ( I raised my eyebrows and mouthed the words, ‘all night?’)
Now listen up. I work for a demanding asshole. I want his job because I can do it better and your going to help me get that job.
Then I can hire a coordinator, maybe you?, if you help me.
I leaned over to her and said, “Can we kiss at work then?” She
shook her head and smiled. She leaned over and kissed me, very sexy and whispered, “Yes, we can kiss at work, if were careful.”
Well, I knew her boss was going to get fired, and his job would be hers, but I couldn’t tell her so.
“What about your boyfriend?” She laughed and said, “What boyfriend?” I said, “Why you little liar!, you have no boyfriend, do
you!” She got red in the face and talked quietly, “Looks like you’re my boyfriend now, all though ‘Jim’s’ are a pain in the ass.
You dared to ask me if that kiss made me wet. Well Mr. smart guy, I got wet the first time I met you, putting me down like you
did excited me and I was going to show you that this ‘Amy’ was not a pain in anybody ass, “ I WIN!” I said “Oh no you don‘t!,
because I made you wet, so I win.” She said, “I know I made you get a boner, so I win!.”
I moved around to her side and sat next to her. She reached over and felt my boner. I felt her leg and pussy as we both smiled
and kissed. I said, “Now that I’m your boyfriend, will you be gentle with me?” We laughed out loud. She said, “No I won’t, your
going to come over to my place TONIGHT, and you WILL bring me flowers and candy at 8 o’clock. Then I will give you instructions from there.” (oooo bossy!)
I looked down her blouse at those wonderful tits, and sighed. She whispered, (“you like my tits?, well I like what I feel in your
pants. You better not be late tonight or you won’t even get to touch them!”) We were in heaven, knowing tonight we were going to fuck ourselves crazy.
We went back to work and paid no attention to each other. I needed more proof on her boss, to make sure he got fired. As luck
would have it, Amy walked by me and said, “Here Jim, would you put this in the mail please, “ and just walked on by. It had no
stamps on it and no return address. I would have to go to the cashier and have her stamp the postage on it. I headed for security.
Glenn, my boss carefully opened it. It was just what we needed to nail Amy’s boss. I couldn’t tell Amy yet.
I arrived at Amy’s house and rang the door bell. She answered the door in a white nightgown. I stood speechless. She said, “Well,
get your ass in here!” I handed her first a weed from her yard and 3 M&M’s. We laughed as she just stood there looking at them in her
hand. Then I went to my car and brought in fresh flowers and a fancy box of candy. We kissed so hot I was on fire as she fondled
my boner and I felt those tits (no bra) for the first time. “Stand right here.” she commanded. She laid on the couch and said, “Feed me
some candy. Hand me that glass of wine, feel my tits, kiss me, rub my pussy, more wine, more kisses.” (It was nice work,)
Finally I whispered, “Excuse me Amy, but I would really like to get naked and lick your pussy.” She said, “Get naked? I’ll
undress you when I’m good and ready, and I’m ready right now, and eat my pussy? I’ll let you know about that in a minuet.” She
pulled me into her bedroom and we undressed each other, kissing all the way. Wow, she had a hot body, sweet butt, nice hips, hot
legs and ’those’ tits. I held her face in my hands, as she held my dick. I said softly, “Amy you’re driving me wonderfully crazy”
She said, “I knew I would, I win.” I held her shoulders and said, “Oh no you don’t!, you bossy little shit!, now get in that bed and spread um!
She said, “ooooo, yes boss!” I pushed her on to the bed and started licking her sweet pussy as she moaned. I licked her clit to
watch her squirm, I ran my fingers in her pussy and massaged it deep, She orgasmed hard and shook. She pulled my other hand up
to feel her tits. I rolled her nipples between my fingers, I moved up and rubbed my dick on her pussy. She said, “Oh boss, are you going to make me have sex with you?”
I said, “Yes, you DO want that promotion don’t you?” We giggled as I pushed my dick in her. Damn, we started fucking us
hard, deep. She turned into a wild woman, wrapping her hot legs around me saying, “Fuck me, fuck me, fuck me, over and over. She
was tight and felt so good as we fucked faster and faster, she kept moaning ’oh Jim, you feel so good’ and then she orgasmed hard
and stiffened up and yelled, “Yesssssssss!” I let go with all I had. I could feel my hot cum thrust into her hot pussy, pumping and
pumping. Damn, she could make her pussy squeeze my dick so good! We lay spent for a long time. I left her sleeping as I went home in a happy daze.
Her boss was gone in 3 days. I asked my boss if I could play a little trick on her. She was already chosen to take his place. She
was not to be told until 9am Monday morning I had my boss take me to her new office like he was showing me around, like I was the
new boss. Amy watched and figured she didn’t get the job, but why did they pick me? She was all confused. I sat at the office desk
with my feet up and buzzed her to come in. She came in trying not to look disappointed. I told her to sit down.
I said, ”Well, how do I look as YOUR new boss?” She was painfully stunned, but tried to be happy for me. I said, “Oh there is
something under my desk would you get it for me girl.” I scooted back in my chair, not helping her at all. I could tell she was livid.
First me calling her ‘girl’, and then making her do this. She had to crawl way under on her hands and knees, (oooo, what an ass!) and
picked up a desk name plate, lying face down. She backed out all red faced and got up. I said, “Read it.”
It said ‘AMY MILLS East Wing manager’ on it. I said, “You win.” She began to tear up, and just stood stunned, holding her new
name plate. I held her as the tears flowed. I yelled, “OK.” and a bunch of people all came in to congratulate her.
I explained it all later as we lay naked in bed that night, all snuggled up and me playing with her tits. She looked at me with an
evil grin this time. (she had that ’paybacks are hell’ look in her eyes).
She rolled on top of me, holding my arms down next to my head and said, “You little shit!, so you knew all this the whole
time?” I smiled and said, “Miss pain in the ass AMY, I told you I would do anything for you.” She giggled, and rolled me on top of
her now. She took her feet and pushed me off end of the bed! With her legs dangling off the end, her hands behind her head said,
“ OH, Now look what you’ve done, I’m all wet!, Well,,,, I’m a big boss now, so you just get down there on YOUR hands an knees
and lick my pussy!, RIGHT NOW!
I said, “yesssssss boss”.

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My Birthday Vacation – A New Cummer (Part 3)

I greatly appreciate everyone’s support, so please continue giving me your feedback and suggestions. I’m sorry it took me so long to upload this part of the story, but I got very busy with school. Hopefully I can continue to write the rest of the story in more regular timing. For those who haven’t read the first two parts, I recommend that you do so before reading this part. And of course happy jacking/jilling, enjoy!

Mother-in-law gets boned

My mother-in-law, Margaret, officially, but Marge or Margie
to most people, and I always got along fairly well. I
treated her decent and liked her cooking and her daughter
was happy with me and I guess that was what she cared most
about.

A Stranger in the Night

I met a lady online and we had a wonderful time together. This is a one off tale and there will be no part 2. I am disabling comments because of the increasing number of perverts that think this is a hunting ground for them serious comments god or not so good can be emailed to me.

my soul mate never thought to be ( part 1 revised and re written

So this started in the 8th grade around second semester and being a normal guy I had intrest in women.
I loved every thing About em well we had 7 periods of course I didn’t focus on all Of em but it wasn’t me talking or messin around periods 2.5.6.7 All had the girl of every guy dreamed about in my classes a 5,3 105 pound blue eyed blond beauty.
She didn’t need any makeup to look perfect Julie.
I’d always Noticed her even talked to her a select few times but it changed in April for my 16th birthday my dad uncle me my cousins went out quading well I come to say I fucked up I made to sharp a turn that my ATV and I couldn’t handle and needless to say I had fractured my ankle so a cast and crutches were my future for the next 6 weeks of my life.
well my school being big took me forever to move none the less having a 20 pound bag to carry for the upcoming finals well me being stubborn said no to being let out early to switch classes or people helping me.
I was late everyday one day just being frustrated I tried to get out so quickly I fell I felt stupid Moronic for not allowing myself help. as I stayed back waiting for everyone else to leave Julie walked up and asked if she could help me caving in and admitting defaet I reluctantly said yes
as we were walking me hobbling I asked why she had asked to help because she had other things she could do she simply replied.
” I’m like you I don’t like help eventhough I need it I had the frustration u have ”
as I looked over I saw her face her eyes her clothes her body everything was perfect about Her Something about her made her look different but sexy. noticing I was starring at her she cleared her throat then asking if there was something wrong I said no and smiled a little knowing she cought me then I said
” sorry I didn’t mean to stare it’s just your… you ya know I’m trying not to sound like a complete ass but your you ”
” yeah I do know that haha ”
” ass mode completed Jim ” speaking to myself
” how do you know I’m me ”
” iv been starring at you every moment in school that I’m there … god why did I say that ”
I made her blush a little
” I don’t know if I should be offended or complemented ”
” I’m no creeper I just know the most beautiful girl iv ever seen is walking down the hall walking and talking to me for reasons I wish never happened and knows exactly how I feel ”
then I noticed what made her look sexier as I looked Back in to these deep blue eyes is she had the perfect amount of eyeliner to make them pop
” that was the nicest thing anybodys said to me ”
she turned and kissed me on the cheek I started blushing
” thank you ”
” please don’t thank me for the truth that I felt I needed to say I rarely share my emotions with any girl I’m mainly afraid of the feeling of rejection but with you it felt like I knew you wouldn’t humiliate me and that you would instantly understand ”
by then we were walkin into 7th world history she sat next to me at my table with my friends slowly she took my hand into hers my friends are looking at me like how n the hell are you holding hands with HER !!!
after class it was time to leave for home I hadn’t gotten a ride to my house so I sat at school 15 minutes after almost everybody dwindled out as I turned my back to leave.
Julie came through the door
” hey jim wait up I can help you home ”
” only if you want to no obligation ”
” I’d love to ”
As we started walking she admitted
” what you said earlier made Me feel wanted for the right reasons not only to be another peice of ass ”
” I’ve never seen you as a sex object eventhough you are jaw dropping beautiful I see you as a women that needs to feel wanted to be loved to be held and I wanna be that guy to do that ”
” is it bad that your the only guy who’s gave me butterflies in my stomach when you speak its incredible ”
” I hope that’s a good thing ”
” it is ”
We walked for a while I could tell my bag was being a burden on her semi small frame
” let me get my bag back ”
” I’m OK ”
“Julie ! I thank you for carrying my bag for me but I can see its becoming a burden and I don’t burden people ever ”
She handed me my bag
” why are men so hard headed ? ”
” first off any guy you see at school is not a man there a hormone red blooded teenager I know I’m one ”
” why ”
” simple every guy wants to be head honcho of everything being top dog makes them the best easily why most good looking guys have good looking girl friends they’re both the best of the best for both sexes its primal nature ”
” fucking wiz kid ”
I looked behind me defiantly knowing that wasn’t Julies voice and of course head honcho Garret Stevens is walking five or six feet behind me
” shut the fuck up Garret ” Julie bursting out in anger
” Julie why the fuck are you talking to not so slim Jim ” snickering
” the fuckd you say ”
I was livid
” shut the fuck up Twinkie I was talking to Julie ”
Julie went to say something I cut her off
“Are you fucking kidding me you degenerate inbred fuck, you wanna eavesdrop on my conversation try to insult me in front of her ( pointing to Julie ) and think I’m just gonna shut up and back off you are really as stupid as you look ”
He approached me clenched fists
” oh what your gonna punch me please do, do it come on make it nice and hard”
I stuck my jaw out and pointed to where I wanted him to punch me
” come on I can’t wait till you do, leg or no leg I’m gonna beat you back into your moms cunt ”
He hesitated to swing to see if I’d flinch I didn’t move I glared at him
” you gonna stand there all day or can me and Julie go I don’t have all day tough guy ”
” yeah you and the slut can go ”
Before I could swing Julies fist was meeting his nose he crumpled like paper then she kicked him in the nuts so hard my asshole twitched at the point of impact all I could say
” Sssssssssss goddamn ”
She started yelling
” YOU CALL ME A SLUT BECAUSE I DIDN”T PUT OUT WHEN WE WENT OUT NEWS FLASH I’M STILL A VIRGIN DICKWAD I RESPECT MY BODY THE ONLY PERSON WHO GETS ME IS THE GUY WHO GIVES A FUCK ABOUT MY EMOTIONS WHO FUCKING CONNECTS TO ME ON A DEEPER LEVEL YEAH AND GO AHEAD AND TRY AND RUIN MY REPUTATION AT SCHOOL ”
she delivered another gut wrenching kick to his man hood and walked away
I spoke quietly to him on the ground
” you ruin her rep I’ll ruin your body ”
I stammered towards her
” Julie! Julie!! Julie!!! ”
She stopped facing away from me I wobbled up behind her and whispered
” julie ”
She turned around her face beat red mascara mixed tears leaving black streaks down her cheeks
” ya did good Julie ”
She leaned into me I dropped my crutches and held her as she wanted she let all of her emotions come flowing out sometime during that time garret got up and stumbled off somewhere after 2 or 3 minutes of crying she started gaining some composure back
” that was a hell of a punch ”
” ha he I know but my hand really hurts ” sniffeling
” lemme get a look ”
” I’m no doctor but I think it I’ll live ”
” haha thank you ”
I kiss her hand and get up to hobble over the bridge as I’m stepping off of the bridge I put my left crutch into the grass it loses grip and slips I follow it tumbling towards the water
” oh shiittt ”
I caught my self right before the edge
” Jesus christ Murphy’s law should be Jim’s law everything that can happen will happen ”
” Jim are you okay ”
She was leaning over me I was looking up straight up in the sun then her body eclipsed mine her face became visible
” yeah ”
” you sure ”
” yeah I’m gonna stay down here for a little ” resting my arm over my eyes
She just stood there
” how bout you join me ”
She sat next to me we stayed like that for 10 or 15 minutes out of the blue I asked
” why ”
” what ”
” why do you give a fuck about me, i was nobody 6 hours ago ”
” you seemed like a legit sweet ass with a few flaws ”
” ah I really am nice aren’t I ”
” I knew I just knew you were gonna get a big head ”
She rolled over on top of me and kissed me ever so gingerly she pulled back and with those Bahama blue eyes stared at me
” was I OK to do that ”
” no yeah um uh its just that’s the first first time I’ve ever been kissed or kissed a girl on the lips
She gave me the best smile not too much but not too little
” really ? ”
” confidence issues remember ”
” right haha ”
” so I’m gonna take a big step more like a leap and assume that you like me am I correct ”
” yep ”
” I’m safe to assume that you like me the same way I like you ”
” yep ”
” god I hope I don’t pass out ”
She gave me another one of those smiles
” Julie ( sighing outwards ) will you go out with me ”
She quickly leaned down and passionately kissed me once I got the hang of it I started kissing back. she noticed I had picked up on how to kiss and opened her mouth slightly running her tounge lightly across my lips
I copied centimeter by centimeter I opened my mouth her tounge peaked into my mouth and slowly she pushed deeper until she had brushed my own I had picked up that she wanted me to do the same and I ran my tounge along hers and she shutterd at the feeling I pulled back
” so I guess that’s a yes ” in between breaths
” Absolutely ”
Some time during us making out she had straddled me and I had the meanest stiffy in the world it was tenting my pants but was restricted about how far it could stick out by the pants, I leaned forward and kissed her again we kissed for awhile before her knees gave out and she landed on my dick we moaned in unison
She started rocking slowly back and forth not speeding up or slowing down moaning deep from within her throat she withdrew from our kiss eyes closed biting her bottom lip she wrapped her arms around me, her eyes opened a sliver she leaned foreword a lowly moaned into my ear and softly blew on it I kissed her bare neck she tasted like she looked
I whispered into her ear
” I’m gonna cum ”
” I already AMMMMMMMMMMMM ”
as soon as she said that my load blew god it was the hardest I’d ever came I fell back my body still rocking from my immense orgasm she landed on top of me she was moaning so loud I knew someone herd us
Her body was twitching when she sad
” god that was incredible ”
I looked down and she looked up those blue eyes connected my own and I swear I already knew we were gonna be together for a long time
We kissed then I looked down we were a mess both of our pants were soaked with our secretions she saw what I was looking at
” fuck we can’t walk home like this ”
” what time is it ”
” 3:30 why ? ”
” I got us a ride ”
I called my friend nick who just got out of high school for the day
” sup nick ”
” nothing much man what’s up ”
” hey could you help me and my girlfriend out by picking us up ”
” yeah where you at ”
” the canal bridge closest side to my house pull into the grass and blow your horn ”
” why can’t you wait on the sidewalk ”
” no questions please I’ll owe ya ”
” OK ill be there in 5 ”
We hung up
” I got us a ride ”
” cool ”
I texted nick
” me n her got hot n hvy and came in our pants ”
” lol nice 1 bud ”
” so if you smell something don’t ask ”
” k ”
Shortly after I herd his horn I helped her into his celica
” hey guys ”
” hey nick thanks ”
” its cool where we goin ”
I looked back and she answers
” I live next to the golf club on Langley ”
We drove and dropped her off and headed back to my house
” dude she’s fucking hot no offence but how ”
” dick ( I said it with the straightest face ) ”
We started cracking up
” honestly I haven’t gotta clue other than I was myself and she still liked me ”
” whatever works I guess ”
” yup ”
We pulled up to my house and said our good byes and I hobbled inside first thing I did was take a shower and dry my cast
I walked into my room and hopped on Facebook first on the feed Julie Robinson has changed her relationship status to in a relationship a couple of her friends had asked who but I had a feeling she had went and took a shower so I accepted the relationship message
And boy o boy did her friends not believe it
A couple saying that I was weird some saying her Facebook was hacked then oddly enough a couple people congradulated her I walked out of my room and down stairs and got something to eat
As I was eating I hadn’t even got her number yet
I went back up stairs got back on my laptop I saw she left me a message and noticed the had written a paragraph sized thing saying it was true and that I was a different guy that had treated her like she wanted god I was proud
Then I opened her message
” I had the best day of my life today thanks to you you don’t know how it felt for me when you said what you said I felt like I was in love no body’s made me this happy or feel this way before thank you also I noticed you never got your number so here it is and I herd what you said to garret thanks text me soon bye ”
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